Thursday, March 14, 2019

WEEK 9: Story: The Muggle Princess

Once Upon a time there was a beautiful young princess named Meredith. The princess was in a secret relationship with William, a young wizard who attended the school of witchcraft. Her parents did not believe in the art of magic and therefore would never allow her to marry a wizard. But, Meredith was in love and was very conflicted on what to do. Her parents would soon expect her to be married and add someone to their royal/muggle family. She ended up marrying a nice and noble prince that her parents approved of. She was heartbroken to have to marry someone she didn’t truly love, but she had no choice. William was devastated and felt betrayed, but he knew his heart and hers belonged together.
So, with his invisible cloak he snuck into the castle. He had a plan to save his princess. He went to the kitchen while it was vacant and stirred up a little confusion concoction. This potion would make the prince sick and confused hopefully allowing William to get alone time with Meredith. After making the potion William snuck out of the kitchen and hurried into where they were serving the prince and Meredith’s meal. He watched him drink the potion, and then “Poof!” he turned into a very sick prince…
The royal staff was embarrassed and immediately sent him away to the nearest hospital. Meredith was just enjoying her food, and acted so worried, however secretly she was relieved. When no one was looking William revealed himself from under the invisible cloak. Meredith’s jaw dropped! It was William! Her REAL Prince Charming! William draped the cloak over both of them and whispered,
“I’ve come to save you sweet Mere! Come live with me and become a witch!”
Meredith apologized, “I am so sorry for marrying someone else, you know I could never love someone as much as you!”

William and Meredith ran out the castle and jumped on his broom and away they went. And they lived Happily Ever After.



Hogwarts


Bibliography:

The Enchanted Prince, written by: by Dean S. Fansler (Web Link), Filipino Tales Unit 

Author's Note: The original story is about a prince who falls in love with a young witch. His father forces the prince to marry the prettiest girl in their town. The young witch felt so hurt and betrayed she turned the prince into a monkey and his whole kingdom into a jungle. He would be stuck as a monkey for five centuries or until he found true love. The monkey prince stayed up in his tree hoping for someone to love, but was turned down so many times. Eventually he noticed a sweet girl outside the church lonely and sad. He took her up to the top of his tree and she soon fell for him. He then turned into a prince again and she woke up in the castle. 


3 comments:

  1. Hi Madee!

    This is such a cute little story about a wizard in love with a muggle! I am a big fan of Harry Potter myself, and it is nice to read innocent, happy stories like this one! I think most of us who are fans of Harry Potter wished to be able to do magic or even know someone that did, so this was an adorable love story with those magical elements!

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  2. Hi Madee.
    What a lovely story! I enjoyed reading something so lighthearted, it really put a smile on my face.
    I wonder what happened after the prince recovered? Did he care that his wife was missing?
    I noticed you capitalized the word "upon" at the beginning. Was this a mistake or a stylistic choice?
    I loved your story, keep up the good work!

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  3. Hi Madee,

    I didn't read this original story, so I had no idea how much you had changed it until I read the author's notes. I think it's neat that you took the basic concept from the story and really made it your own. I can definitely see the influences from Harry Potter as well, and all together I think it turned out to be a cute story!

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