The Red Queen loves riddles, tricks, and puzzles. She believes that a clever mind is more attractive than all the gold in wonderland. She spends hours making her own riddles, doing puzzles, and her personal favorite playing sudoku.
This year
she wanted to really challenge the men competing. After all, the winner gets to
go on a date with The Red Queen. She is very picky, that being said the annual
event will come to an end once she finds her perfect match.
For this
year’s challenge she is going to put the competitors in an escape room. The
competitors will individually have to figure out all the clues in order to open
the locked case to The Red Queen’s heart. The competitors will have to be
knowledgeable on things they know about the queen, her likes and dislikes. She
has been single for a long time and really wants to settle down with someone.
So, this year it’s really important the best candidate wins her heart. She
needed a little help coming up with clever clues in the escape room. She called
up the Mad Hatter in hopes he could use his quirk to help. He was hesitate
because The Red Queen is very intimidating, but soon realized he had no other
choice. Once he arrived they brainstormed and began making some great clues and
tricks to out in the escape room. The Red Queen felt very confident that the
right man would be able to solve it and unlock her heart!
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| (The Red Queen) |
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| (Queen's locked heart) |
Hi Madee,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story. It was very well written and entertaining. You know, for someone who is looking for love, the Red Queen is definitely hard to get. But I am sure if she does find someone, they would be perfect. I would have liked it if you included an author's note to see your take on the story.
Hi Madee,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading your story, “The Red Queen’s Riddle.” I thought your story was creative. I really enjoyed how you combined the historic tale of the Red Queen with the modern escape room. Your story was very entertaining. I personally loved your story because I love all things Alice in Wonderland. Overall, great story and I look forward to reading what stories are to come.
Hey Madee,
ReplyDeleteI wanted to start by saying your creativity is outstanding. I enjoyed this story very much. The detail in your story made it easy for me to create a visual in my head. That's usually the first sign to me that I am reading a good story!
Hey Madee,
ReplyDeleteJust wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading your story! I really loved the Alice in Wonderland story. I think that your style of writing is certainly something to marvel at; however, I am wondering what the original story was. Author's notes really help readers understand the story and your own mindset while writing it. Add that and you'll be good, great job on the story.
Madee,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story! I thought that it was so creative and engaging, and I love all the detail you put into the story. I'm not super familiar with the original content (most of my knowledge of Alice in Wonderland comes from the Disney version, which is not always true to the original story). Overall really good story though!
-Kate
Hey Madee!
ReplyDeleteSolid story! It was short and but sweet, but it still managed to draw me in. I'm honestly kind of intrigued to know what kind of clues the Red Queen came up with. And apart from being a good short story, I think the idea of an escape room with the chance to win a date would be an interesting TV show.
Hey Madee!
ReplyDeleteThis is certainly an interesting opening to a story you've crafted here. I do wish we could have seen the ending to the escape room, if only to see if anyone was able to unlock something as confusing as the heart of the Red Queen. I love Wonderland setting stories quite a bit, and I think you've crafted one that fits the narrative well.